英语四级考试作文的写作思路:
第一段:表明对朋友的感谢并点题;
第二段:朋友用哪些方式帮我在哪些方面克服了困难;
第三段:再次表示对朋友诚挚的感谢并祝愿朋友身体健康。
【真题及参考范文版本一】
作文一:
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to express your thanks to one of your friends who helped you most when you were in difficulty. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
参考答案:
Dear brother,
I am writing to express my heartfelt gratitude for the continuous assistance you offered to me these years.
On one hand, your generous help made it possible that I can gain a splendid academic achievement in my study career. It is because of your encouragement that now I can study in one of the leading universities of our country, and serve as chairman of Student Union. On the other hand, with your help, Icould get along well with my friends and have good cooperation with other members during work. I will always remember your kindness and painstaking labor. Besides, It is really an honor for me to be your sister and I will cherish the goodwill you showed to me wherever I go.
In a word, my appreciation to you is beyond words. In the years to come, I will make more effort to repay your kindness and refresh our family affection.
Yours sincerely, Li Hua
作文二:
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to express your thanks to one of your school teachers upon entering college. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
参考答案:
Dear teacher,
I am writing to express my appreciation for the generous help you rendered to me since I entered this university.
On one hand, it is because of your encouragement and continuous assistance that now I have obtained a splendid academic achievement in my study career, and serve as chairman of Student Union. On the other hand, with your help,I could get along well with classmates and have good cooperation with other members during work.I will always remember your kindness and painstaking labor.It is really an honor to be your student, and I will cherish the goodwill you showed to me wherever I go.
In a word, my heartfelt gratitude to you is beyond words. In the years to come, I will study harder to repay your kindness and make more progress.
Yours sincerely, Li Ming
作文三:
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to express your thanks to your parents or any family members upon making memorable achievement. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
参考答案:
Dear my father and mother,
This letter is my inner feelings. I want to thank both of you for so many years’ care and help.
During my growth, you have made a lot of efforts and love for me. When I make a success, both of you are more excited than me, and support me to do better. Even though I have failed, you always share sorrow with me and encourage me not to give up. Especially, during my preparation for CET-4, the support from you is always everywhere. I have passed the exam successfully.
You love is so unselfish that I am deeply affected, so I will study hard to be a useful person and won’t make you disappointed. Anyway, I would like to express the deep gratitude to you.
With best wishes.
Sincerely yours, Li Ming
【真题及参考范文版本二】
第一版:
For thispart, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to express your thanks to one of your friends who helped you most whenyou were in difficulty. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
第一段: 写出写信目的.(表达感谢)
第二段: 阐述感谢的原因.
第三段:再次表达感谢,并可表述希望有机会可以给对方回报.
Dear Mary,
I would like to take this opportunity to express my heartfelt gratitude to you for your help when I was indifficulty. You have been very kind and helpful since we knew each other.
Last week, I caught a bad cold and had to stay at home for a week. When I was worrying about the lessons, you came to my home after school and helped me with every subject. With your help,I didn’t fall behind others.
Again, thanks so much for your enthusiastic help. Even though you are to about to go abroad for further education I know that I will always stay in touch with you.I wish you every success in the future and I hope we can exchange more viewpoints on study.
Please keep in touch, and drop in and visit us whenever you are in this part of the world.
Very sincerely, Peter
第二版:
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to express your thanks to one of your school teachers upon entering college. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
第一段: 写出写信目的.(表达感谢)
第二段: 阐述感谢的原因.
第三段:再次表达感谢,并可表述希望有机会可以给对方回报.
Dear sir,
I am writing to you to express my thanks for your help in learning English.
You are one of the best teachers who I have ever met .There are many good points that I learn from you.
During these days in your class, I have acquired much knowledge from you and it really helps me a lot.
Firstly, you let me know what the west thinking pattern is —straight thinking pattern. As an English learner, it is important for me to understand the difference between them.
There is no denying the fact that this can help me with my examination and interaction with foreigners. What’s more, I’m glad to be your student, and I am very happy to learn the course under your guidance. English is an important tool, through which we can share our experience with the world. I treasure the chance of learning English, and I enjoy the happiness from your course.
The last but not the least, please forgive those mistakes I have made which may upset you. What I have learned from you will help me pass the coming examinations and also be useful for my further education in abroad. It is not only a progress of learning, but also acultivation of my ability.
May everything go well around you. Your student, Li ling
第三版:
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to express your thanks to your parents or any family members upon making memorable achievement. You should write at least 120 words but no more than180 words.
第一段: 写出写信目的.(表达感谢)
第二段: 阐述感谢的原因.
第三段:再次表达感谢,并可表述希望有机会可以给对方回报.
Dear parents,
This letter is to tell you my true feelings from the bottom of my heart. Although we can keep in virtual touch every day, I still feel it not enough to let you know how much I love you and how much I’ve appreciated what you’ve done for me.
In the past 20 years, you have done a lot for me. Firstly, thank you so much for bringing me up. I know how hard you've being working in the past. I can imagine how many difficulties and obstacles you've conquered. Second,I want to thank you for your good education on me. There is an old saying goes like this “parents are the first teachers to their children”. Both of you are the typical ones.
The most important thing that I want to say “thank you” is for your great admiration on my own freedom. You told me to look over the horizons and to pursuit my own dreams without hesitation.
I really feel that my pen fails me when I am writing this thank you letter. The only thing I hope you can do for me is to take good care of yourselves and you will be always proud of me.
Yours beloved Son
针对感谢信的写作要求,我们应该注意以下几点:
1. 格式要正确。
与其他应用文写作一样,书信体裁需要在正文的前面加上称呼,在正文的末尾加上结束语,落款和署名。
2. 标点符号要正确。
Dear+称谓的后面一定要用逗号,不能用冒号。还要注意英语的句号是实心的,并且涉及到书名、电影名或者作品名的,要大些,英语中没有书名号。
3. 考生需要根据题目要求完成写作。
在这一部分,考生需要注意字数的要求是120-180字,不能少些或者超出。另外,虽然题目中并未对落款人作过多要求,但是考生还是有必要把敏感的人名、地名和学校名去掉,以防作弊嫌疑。
4. 通过三个题目的要求,我们都要明确表明我们的感激之心,表述时要目标明确,语言贴切、充分,内容言之有物,句子流畅地道。
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